this is the second research paper that i read

The second research I read is from Debra:

1. Does the draft have a main point (thesis)?
"We must change our habits and save our reefs".

2.Find an instance of what you consider an interesting or useful example, image, chart, etc. and explain why.

I think that the part that i like is the comparision or the explanation of the coral
"A good way to imagine a coral reef is to think of it as a busy city or community, with the buildings made of coral, and thousands of inhabitants coming and going, carrying out their business. In this sense, a coral reef is a city under the sea".

3.Find a place in the paper that you consider confusing or boring and explain why.
i think that is really interesting...

4. Does the draft acknowledge where information comes from IN THE BODY OF THE TEXT?
yes it does


5. If the draft has a fictional "human interest story,"
fictional yea when she mentions sponge bob's friend

6.Would you recommend that the writer get some help with grammar before turning in the last draft? Why? Why not?
Good grammar